lyrical wordsmith.... not

I feel like I have enough to say, but every time I write it down, it looks like shit to me. The other day I was once again inspired by a song to write some of my own lyrics to it. It was '93 till infinity' by the Souls of Mischief. I wanted to write more, but when I looked back at what I had already written down, I just gave up...
Anyway, here are the lyrics (just one verse though, and it's probably not a good idea to read it if you're not into hip hop at all).

A new path is made

I’m weighing my options

I’m not getting paid

I remain very cautious

I don’t want to lose

The little that I have

And I simply refuse

To leave without a laugh

That means a smile on my face

As I walk out the door

Even though I know my place

I know that I deserve more

That’s for me to find out

And for you to decide.

I don’t need support,

I’m motivated by my pride.

I got that hunger inside

To go places beyond my reach

I tell ‘em they can succeed

And I practise what I preach.

I am the student and the teach.

That means I learn from myself

And in time that’ll teach me

To enlarge my wealth

You just take your time

To discover who I am

I’ll just chill for a while

Which has always been my plan

Never worked hard

I’m as spoiled as a prince

Was born in 93

Been chillin’ ever since.

It’s a lifestyle

That I must prolong

Cause every other way of living just

Feels so wrong

Best homies in the world

Poker nights and all

Pouring out our liquor

Afterwards we ball

Man I have it all,

And yet I want more

The big things in life

Are what I adore

And stressing over lil things

Over my dead body

Gonna kick it with me crew

Like we doing karate

That's all folks...